14. Peer Feedback -02

 Peer Feedback 2

Asma 

Strength 

Good introduction; easy to understood what the aim of the advert is.

Suitable time management to present the section of the presentation

Good attempt to develop the advert. 

The background of advertising had been developed during the project. I can see
the effort through the process.

Attractive final output. It would be suitable for fashion magazine.

Weakness

Not enough the primary research's result

Lack of the using a high quality background photos. It can be seen many pixels.

The advert  was used only one size of the channel

Suggestion

Try to Collect the survey result from the outside. Do not collect the result of survey from 'only' classmates. You can receive the more good quality answers from public.  How about share on your private social media, or send the survey link to your friends in your connects?

Try to use different channel forms for advert. We should use three different(size) channel for advertising. 

If you use shadow under the shoes or font, it could be better to see that easily.

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Gina

strength

Good organisation of research and process

I can see her effort to show the advertising process step by step

Good attempt to use a line in suitable area

It seems to be an Art Deco style.  It tends to use suitable colour for the aim of the advert, even though there are some colour contrast  problem.

Weakness

I can not understand clearly thorough the presentation,

The outcome is little different from the screen, because of colour setting for printing.

The main elements can not be seen clearly

Suggestion

Use the CMYK mode for printing

Make some colour contrasts

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Josie

Strength

The blog posting were more developed, when I saw it before

Used the fascinating images to make audience attention on the presentation

It can be shown her effort and attempt

Suitable background colour arrangement

It is clear to see that, the advert is used the different types of channel and

suitable re-arrange for the each types.

Weakness

I can not listen clear because of your small voice

It tended to be used a lot of colours in main advert's image, because of the colours of food

Suggestion

Try to use bigger volume when you present

Need to be careful 'political correctness UK'